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雅思写作真题 雅思写作评分标准细则篇一

1、aaa has improved the quality of our lives and are playing an important role in our daily benefits aaa brings to us are far more than its r, we cannot ignore its problem.2、on the positive side, aaa has enabled us to(1)此处填入 aaa 的优势之一。for instance,（2）举例说明优势之一。besides,(3)aaa 的优势之二。nowadays,(4)举例说明优势之

二。in addition,（5）aaa 的优势之三。

3、on the negative side,(6)此处填入 aaa 的劣势之一。for example,(7)举例说明劣势之一。besides,(8)aaa 的劣势之二。furthermore,(9)aaa 的劣势之三。

4、all in all, we can not live without aaa for the conveniences it brings to us, but we should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on the modern life.分析型

1、recently the...has been brought into focus...nowhere in history has the issue been more this essay, i aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.2、as far as i am concerned, an array of integrated factors contributes to the...the first role that should be blamed is...another equally important factor lies in… last but not least...3、as a matter of fact,...gives rise to a host of problems, such as...confronted with such a thorny issue, people come up with a variety of constructive ally, the following are worth recommendation...4、when everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, i firmly believe...一面倒

1、.no invention has received more praises and abuses than cars… now there is a growing awareness over traffic safety.2、although some people acclaim that… i am still prone to go along with the other side based on the following sound reasons...3、to embark on it, it comes as the first problem that...4、should it remain unable to unfold my perspectives, it'll come as reinforcement that…

5、it is indisputable that nowhere in history has...been more far as i am concerned… task 1

(一)信息描述或数据比较

1、the graph illustrates(1)总体介绍图表情况。according to the graph, in year1,(2)year1 年的信息描述。for example,(3)举例说明。however by year2,(4)year2 的信息描述。during the same period, there was a large increase in(5)描述数据转变。in year1,(6)提供 year1 的数据。in contrast, by year2,（7）提供 year2 的数据。we can conclude from this that(8)总结图表最突出的特点。

2、the two pie charts describe(1)总体介绍图表情况。this first point to note is(2)图表提供的第一条信息。comparing the graphs,(3)两幅表比较。the graph also suggest that(4)图表说明的问题。in conclusion, it can be seen from the data that(5)总结图表数据所证明的内容。the most noticeable thing is(6)总结图表最突出的特点。

3、the first graph illustrates(1)总体介绍图表情况。the second graph shows(2)图表提供的第一条信息。the first graph reveals that(3)描述图表说明的问题。the second graph tells us that

(4)图表说明的问题。as can be seen from the two graphs that(5)总结图表最突出的特点。

4、the two pie charts show(1)总体介绍图表情况。and the column chart gives l,(2)三幅图整体上所提供的信息。the pie charts shows that(3)图表提供的第一条信

息。the highest percentage of(4)图表说明的问题 is(5)%.however, this is less than the

percentage of(6)图表说明的问题 for some reasons, which is approximately(7)%.the common

reasons of(8)are（9）原因。it is apparent that(10)描述数据所表明的内容。

5、the indicators used in the table reflect that(1)总体介绍图表情况。the data concerning(2)

填入指数 1 indicators shows that(3)指数反映的情况。there figures are overwhelmingly

greater than the corresponding figures of(4)填入 1 个信息主体。（5）填入指数 2 reflect(6)

指数反映的情况。as for(7)指数 3 indicators, it roughly follows the same ranking.(8)指数 3

反映的情况。according to(9)指数 4 it can be seen that(10)指数反映的情况。the data

appears to confirm that(11)描述数据所表明的内容。(二)描述事件的具体步骤或过程

the chart shows that there are four stages to complete(1)此处填入一件具体的事情。the first

stage is(2)the second stage involves(3),(4)is the third of all,(5)完成步骤三的第一步then(6)完成步骤三的第二步。the last stage consisits of(7).(三)描述一事物说明她的工作程序

aaa is(1)the diagram shows it’s construction and how it mainly consists of(2)aaa的组成部分。aaa works as follows : first(3)then(4)afterwards,(5).at last,(6).task 2

命题形式一：对立观点式

（一）a or b ,which one do you agree with? give specific reasons for your answer.(a,b 表示

供选择的两种观点。do c 指题目中提及的某件事情。如：some people prefer a in order to do

c.1、a much debated issue these days is whether a or people say that claim my part, i agree with those who stree have shown that(1)赞同 a 的原因之一。

moreover,(2)赞同 a 的原因之二。nevertheless, it would be a mistake to discount the impact

of all know that(3)列举 b 的优势。for instance,(4)举例说明 b 的优势。however, i

think that without a,b will fail to(5)总结观点。

2、some people hold the opinion of , however, believe are advantages and

disadvantages on both ting to my personality and foundness, i would prefer a rather

than gh b(1)b 的优势，there is no evidence to suggest that b is better than y,(2)

选择 a 的第一个原因。secendly,(3)选择 a 的第二个原因。we can see that(4)举例说明

选择 a 的第二个原因。furthermore,(5)选择 a 的第三个原因。for instance,（6）举

例说明选择 a 的第三个原因。so, as i see it,(7)总结观点。

3、as for the question that which is better, a or b, different people have different opinions.a has

its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many my point of view, i would

prefer of all,(1)支持 b 的原因之一。for example,(2)举例说明支持 b 的原因之

一。another reason is that(3)支持 b 的原因之二。the third reason, however, goes this way:(4)

支持 b 的原因之三。so from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that(5)

重申观点。

4、some people believe a, they point out the fact that(1)人们支持 a 的原因。however, other

people believe hold that(2)人们支持 b 的原因。as far as i’m concerned, i prefer we all know(3)我支持 a 的原因之一。i remrember(4)举例说明。in addition,(5)我支

持 a 的原因之二。on the other hand,(6)从反面论证 a 的优势。last but not least,(7)我支

持 a 的原因之三。as a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in a，such as(8)举

例说明 a 的劣势。but these can be compensated by its advantages.5、there are two different views on the matter of doing people believe that(1)支持的观点 this , they argue that(2)进一步阐述观点 example,(3)举例说明。others

hold, on the other hand, that(4)反对的观点 b。forthermore,(5)进一步阐述观点

instance,(6)举例说明观点 b。considering the views on the two sides, i prefer to put weight to

the pros rather than ally,(7)我支持 a 的原因。

（二）给出两个对立的事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生比较两者的优缺点并提

供理由。some people believe aaa while others believe advantages and

disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you reasons for

your answer.1、aaa has improved the quality of our lives and played an important role in our daily

benefits aaa brings to us are far more than its r, it also creates some

problems as the postive side, aaa has enabled us to(1)此处填入 aaa 的优势之一。

for instance,(2)举例说明优势之一。besides,(3)aaa 的优势之二。nowadays,(4)举例说

明优势之二。in addition,(5)aaa 的优势之三。on the negative side,(6)此处填入 aaa 的劣势之一。for example,(7)举例说明劣势之一。also,(8)aaa 的劣势之二。furthermore,(9)aaa 的劣势之三。all in all , we can’t live without aaa for the conveniences it brings to us,but we should also be aware of the negative effacts it creates on the modern life.2、some people believe aaa, but others claim bbb, while both have their advantages and

disadvantages, they can be applied under different aaa,(1)优势之一。

however, in some cases, there are some negative seriously,(2)aaa 的第一个劣

势。moreover,(3)aaa 的第二个劣势。again,(4)aaa 的第三个劣势。on the other hand,(5)bbb 的优势。for example,(6)举例说明 bbb 的优势。in my opinion, the advantages of

bbb are more than those of aaa, because bbb fits me in two ways:first,(7)我支持 bbb 的原

因之一。second,(8)我支持 bbb 的原因之二。

3、aaa may involve some problems in terms of its r, there are stell many advantages

of of all,(1)aaa 的优势之一。furthermore,(2)aaa 的优势之二。finally,(3)aaa的优势之三。some people claim that(4)人们反对 aaa 的理由之一。i don’t think this is

altogether fact,(5) also say that(6)人们反对 aaa is true that such cases do exist in out r, these cases are uncommon and are the result

of bad the problems are in fact the problems of bad management, not aaa conclusion, there are more advantages than disadvantages of most cases, therefore, the

cost is justified.4、there is a good side and a bad side to t exception, aaahas brought us not

only benefits but also we know that(1)aaa 的一个劣势。however, this does not mean

aaa has no is obvious that(2)aaa 的优势之一。also,(3)aaa 的优势之二。a final

point is that(4)aaa 的优势之三。for example,(5)举例说明。although there is a great deal of

enthusiasm nowadays over the advantages of aaa, its disadvantages should not be importantly,(6)aaa 的劣势之一。furthermore,(7)aaa 的劣势之二。last but not least,(8)aaa 的劣势之三。however, we can avoid the negative effects with appropriate management

such as(9)列举控制 aaa 负面影响的措施。so as shown above, i consider the advantages

outweigh the disadvantaghes.命题形式二：单一观点式

（一）statement a about you agree or disagree with this statement? give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1、i full agree with the argument that(1)支持观点 one thing(2)支持观点 a 的原因之一。for another,(3)支持观点 a 的原因之二。history has told us that(4)历史证明 a 的正确性。for example,(5)举例证明。furthermore,(6)进一步阐述 a 的正确性。but some people stubbornly cling to(7)人们反对观点 we listen to these people we will(8)听从那些人会产生的后果。in conclusion, i think we should not(9)我们不应该怎麽做。

on the contrary, we should(10)我们应该怎麽做。

2、according to the opinion of some people , there are quite different attitudes towards claim that(1)人们的观点 r, i can not agree(2)我反对观点 ,(3)我反对 aaa 的第一个理由。that is to say(4)进一步阐述。second,(5)我反对 aaa 的第二个理由。in fact,(6)举例说明。finally,(7)我反对 aaa 的第三个理由。to sum up,(8)总结我的观点。but it is also necessary to stress that(9)退一步总结。

3、it is often said that(1)题目所给的观点。those who hold this view say that(2)进一步阐述该观点。i disagree with this point of view for the following first and goremost one is

(3)我反对的理由之一。history presented many examples(4)举例说明。my second reason is

(5)我反对的理由之二。we can learn this from the saying “(6)用一句谚语说明 ”.finally, it seems to be true that(7)此处填入该观点的可取之处。but(8)我反对的理由之三。all in all, i

firmly believe that(9)总结我的观点。

4、the problem is a much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily may prefer one to another, although some have no opinion about if i am concerned, i find it hard to agree with of all,(1)我反对 aaa 的第一个理由。it is common in daily life that(2)举例说明。aother thing i should point out is that(3)我反对 aaa 的第二个理由。moreover,(4)我反对 aaa 的第三个理由。in general, aaa may have something right in

special it is necessarity a bad thing to(5)aaa 的缺陷。to my mind,(6)总结我的观点。

5、there is a growing tendeney these days for people to do people criticize this because they think(1)人们观点 also say that(2)进一步阐述观点 it seems to me that aaa is useful to(3)aaa 的好处之一。i firmly believe that it is not only useful but also necessary to(4)aaa 的好处之二。examples can be easily found(5)举例说明。as a result,(6)进一步说明 aaa 的好处。so, based on the above discussion, i argue that(7)总结我的观点。

（二）给一个论点，主要是对两个事务进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。具体表现如下： a is superior to b in doing you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer.1、something we all cannot neglect as we get older is to accept the opinions of the question whether it is better to choose a or choose b, i have long admitled that a has a

strong ely ,however,(1)提出自己的观点支持 b.i disagree with the above

statement and support the superiority of gh(2)a 具备的优势。there is no evidence to suggest that(3)a 胜于 ’s more,(4)a 的一个缺点。it also has been said that(5)a 的第二个缺点。to be sure,(6)支持 b 的一个理由。another thing why i dispute the statement above is that i am very sure that(7)支持 b 的另一个理由。for example,(8)举例说明。in

conclusion, a could never equal b(9)a 和 b 的比较，总结观点。

2、this controversy deseribes the dilcmma faced by many for me, i agree with the above statement that a is superior to b in doing is an obvious fact that(1)赞同 a 比 b 好的第一个原因。for instance,(2)举例说明。another reason i should point out lies in the fact that(3)赞同 a 比 b 好的第二个原因。in today’s world,(4)举例说明。this may explain why

a is better than the other hand , a common sense goes that(5)b 的劣势之一。moreover,(6)b 的劣势之二。to conclude,(7)总结我的观点。

命题形式三：开放观点式

argument a(and b)about doing ’s your opinion about it ?

1、an important question facing us today is(1)提出问题。some argue that(2)观点 example,(3)举例说明观点 ,(4)进一步阐述观点 nts of this view say that

(5)观点 claim that(6)全面阐述 my part, there are merits to both of these should(7)我们应该赞同 a。at the same time,(8)同时也不能忽视 b.2、nowadays almost everynoe discusses about whether aaa is ’s views on it are people believe argue that(1)阐述观点 who believe b, on the other hand ,argue that(2)阐述观点 maintain that(3)进一步阐述观点 is certain some truth on both sides, yet neither provides a satisfactory my view,(4)我的观点。we should(5)进一步阐述我的观点。as such,(6)这样做能带来的好处。

3、aaa is a question of have different notions about the matter: some hold that(1)观点 think(2)观点 fore, i would like to have a look at the question in this of the strong points is that(3)aaa 的优势之一。moreover,(4)aaa 的优势之

二。in fact,(5)举例说明。on the other hand,(6)aaa 的劣势之一。in addition,(7)aaa 的劣势之二。for example,(8)举例说明。as shown above, i would like to say that(9)总结我的观点。so, each case should be reviewed and coucluded on the basis of facts.4、people who support aaa hold that(1)观点 s this is true, but it can not be denied that(2)我提出反对意见。i think it is important to take a glance at the argument on both one side ,people may have reasons to believe most important reason is(3)人们支持 aaa 的理由之一。in addition,(4)人们支持 aaa 的理由之二。for instance,(5)举例说明。moreover,(6)人们支持 aaa 的理由之三。on the other hand, people who attack aaa claim that(7)观点 also say that there will be problems of(8)aaa 带来的问题。as far as i am concerned, i come to the notion that everything in the world has its own two lly, aaa is acceptable in some r, problems do should take more efficient measues to avoid and minimize them.5、nowadays,(1)题目中问题。however, this situation has raised people say that(2)观点 point out that(3)进一步阐述观点 example,(4)举例说明。on the other hand, others say that(5)观点 my opinion, neither sider is completely is true that(6)我的观点。for instance,(7)举例说明。however,(8)从反面来平衡我的观点。命题形式四：报告文

a specific problem aaa, suggest possible solutions(a,b,……)or recommendations(a,b,……).give reasons for your answer.1、nowadays aaa has become a serious problem in many reasons for this behavior are not clear , but some sociologists claim that(1)社会学家认为导致问题的原因。as a matter of fact,(2)进一步阐述此问题的原因。consequently,(3)该原因产生的结果。in my point of

view, a possible cause of the problem is that(4)我认为导致问题的原因之一。also,(5)我人们导致问题的原因之二。the effects of this are well known,(6)aaa 造成的影响之一。

furthermore,(7)aaa 造成的影响结果之二。the cost to society is great.(8)社会上付出的代价。to conclude, i recommend that the only sensible way to solve this problem is(9)总结并提出建议。

2、people how are well aware of the problems aaa creates:(1)aaa 带来的问题。the solution, i think, is for government to(2)政府所要解决的问题。one way is that(3)措施之一。there is also another way(4)措施之二。moreover,(5)措施之三。indeed, we should make great efforts to solve this problem(6)总结自己的观点。

3、in most countries aaa is causing a considerable number of some countries it is difficult to(1)阐述 aaa 带来的第一个问题。in addition,(2)aaa 带来的第二个问题。also,(3)aaa 带来的第三个问题。in my opinion, there are two main solutions to the discussed y,(4)第一个解决方案。secondly,(5)第二个解决方案。this is beginning to habe an effect in some countries.i believe that other countries will also tade this way to solve the problem in the near sum up, if the problem continues, the effects will be we should(6)总结观点。

4、it is very difficult to(1)提出问题。there have been several attempts, but they have had generally little or no methods are usually ineffective for many ,(2)这些方法不奏效的原因之一。second,(3)这些方法不奏效的原因之二。in addition,(4)这些方法不奏效的原因之三。another attempt is(5)提出另一种尝试。in my opinion, this is a waste of money and labor,(6)我认为这种尝试不奏效的原因之一。also,(7)我人们这种尝试不奏效的原因之二。to conclude, no current methods as mentioned above are effective.i think governments as well as individuals need to work harder to find a realistic solution.5、one of the most challenging problems of today’s world is that(1)提出问题。it’s not only a question of the government but also a question of the individuals.i would like to discuss the

possible ,(2)第一个解决方案。the advantage of this solution is that(3)第一个解决方案的优点点。the secoud one is(4)第二个解决方案。by this method,(5)第二个解决方案的优点。unfortunately, this is not a truly available solution as the reality in our country r way of solving the problem is to(6)第三个解决方案。this does not seem a very fair one because(7)第三个解决方案不好的原因。one frther solution here i can find is(8)第四个解决方案。however,(9)第四个解决方案的不足之处。in sum, it’s true that we can not find a definite solution for this of the solution i presented has both advantages and i believe it can be only a matter of time in the future.

雅思写作真题 雅思写作评分标准细则篇二

说明一物的利弊

1、aaa has improved the quality of our lives and are playing an important role in our daily benefits aaa brings to us are far more than its r, we cannot ignore its problem.2、on the positive side, aaa has enabled us to(1)此处填入 aaa 的优势之一。for instance,（2）举例说明优势之一。besides,(3)aaa 的优势之二。nowadays,(4)举例说明优势之二。in addition,（5）aaa 的优势之三。

3、on the negative side,(6)此处填入 aaa 的劣势之一。for example,(7)举例说明劣势之一。besides,(8)aaa 的劣势之二。furthermore,(9)aaa 的劣势之三。

4、all in all, we can not live without aaa for the conveniences it brings to us, but we should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on the modern life.分析型

1、recently the...has been brought into focus...nowhere in history has the issue been more this essay, i aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.2、as far as i am concerned, an array of integrated factors contributes to the...the first role that should be blamed is...another equally important factor lies in… last but not least...3、as a matter of fact,...gives rise to a host of problems, such as...confronted with such a thorny issue, people come up with a variety of constructive ally, the following are worth recommendation...4、when everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, i firmly believe...一面倒

1、.no invention has received more praises and abuses than cars… now there is a growing awareness over traffic safety.2、although some people acclaim that… i am still prone to go along with the other side based on the following sound reasons...3、to embark on it, it comes as the first problem that...4、should it remain unable to unfold my perspectives, it'll come as reinforcement that…

5、it is indisputable that nowhere in history has...been more far as i am concerned…task 2

命题形式一：对立观点式

（一）a or b ,which one do you agree with? give specific reasons for your answer.(a,b 表示供选择的两种观点。do c 指题目中提及的某件事情。如：some people prefer a in order to do c.1、a much debated issue these days is whether a or people say that claim my part, i agree with those who stress s have shown that(1)赞同 a 的原因之一。moreover,(2)赞同 a 的原因之二。nevertheless, it would be a mistake to discount the impact of all know that(3)列举 b 的优势。for instance,(4)举例说明 b 的优势。however, i think that without a,b will fail to(5)总结观点。

2、some people hold the opinion of , however, believe are advantages and disadvantages on both ting to my personality and fondness, i would prefer a rather than gh b(1)b 的优势，there is no evidence to suggest that b is better than y,(2)选择 a 的第一个原因。secondly,(3)选择 a 的第二个原因。we can see that(4)举例说明选择 a 的第二个原因。furthermore,(5)选择 a 的第三个原因。for instance,（6）举例说明选择 a 的第三个原因。so, as i see it,(7)总结观点。

3、as for the question that which is better, a or b, different people have different opinions.a has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many my point of view, i would prefer of all,(1)支持 b 的原因之一。for example,(2)举例说明支持 b 的原因之一。another reason is that(3)支持 b 的原因之二。the third reason, however, goes4、some people believe a, they point out the fact that(1)人们支持 a 的原因。however, other people believe hold that(2)人们支持 b 的原因。as far as i’m concerned, i prefer we all know(3)我支持 a 的原因之一。i remember(4)举例说明。in addition,(5)我支持 a 的原因之二。on the other hand,(6)从反面论证 a 的优势。last but not least,(7)我支持 a 的原因之三。as a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in a，such as(8)举例说明 a 的劣势。but these can be compensated by its advantages.5、there are two different views on the matter of doing people believe that(1)支持的观点 this , they argue that(2)进一步阐述观点 example,(3)举例说明。others hold, on the other hand, that(4)反对的观点 b。furthermore,(5)进一步阐述观点 instance,(6)举例说明观点 b。considering the views on the two sides, i prefer to put weight to the pros rather than ally,(7)我支持 a 的原因。this way:(4)支持 b 的原因之三。so from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that(5)重申观点。

（二）给出两个对立的事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生比较两者的优缺点并提供理由。some people believe aaa while others believe advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you reasons for your answer.1、aaa has improved the quality of our lives and played an important role in our daily benefits aaa brings to us are far more than its r, it also creates some problems as the positive side, aaa has enabled us to(1)此处填入 aaa 的优势之一。for instance,(2)举例说明优势之一。besides,(3)aaa 的优势之二。nowadays,(4)举例说明优势之二。in addition,(5)aaa 的优势之三。on the negative side,(6)此处填入 aaa 的劣势之一。for example,(7)举例说明劣势之一。also,(8)aaa 的劣势之二。furthermore,(9)aaa 的劣势之三。all in all , we can’t live without aaa for the conveniences it brings to us, but we should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on the modern life.2、some people believe aaa, but others claim bbb, while both have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different aaa,(1)优势之一。however, in some cases, there are some negative seriously,(2)aaa 的第一个劣势。moreover,(3)aaa 的第二个劣势。again,(4)aaa 的第三个劣势。on the other hand,(5)bbb 的优势。for example,(6)举例说明 bbb 的优势。in my opinion, the advantages of bbb are more than those of aaa, because3、aaa may involve some problems in terms of its r, there are still many advantages of of all,(1)aaa 的优势之一。furthermore,(2)aaa 的优势之二。finally,(3)aaa 的优势之三。some people claim that(4)人们反对 aaa 的理由之一。i don’t think this is altogether fact,(5) also say that(6)人们反对 aaa is true that such cases do exist in out r, these cases are uncommon and are the result of bad the problems are in fact the problems of bad management, not aaa conclusion, there are more advantages than disadvantages of most cases, therefore, the cost is justified.4、there is a good side and a bad side to t exception, aaa has brought us not only benefits but also we know that(1)aaa 的一个劣势。however, this does not mean aaa has no is obvious that(2)aaa 的优势之一。also,(3)aaa 的优势之二。a final point is that(4)aaa 的优势之三。for example,(5)举例说明。although there is a great deal of enthusiasm nowadays over the advantages of aaa, its disadvantages should not be importantly,(6)aaa 的劣势之一。furthermore,(7)aaa 的劣势之二。last but not least,(8)aaa 的劣势之三。however, we can avoid the negative effects with appropriate management such as(9)列举控制 aaa 负面影响的措施。so as shown above, i consider the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.命题形式二：单一观点式

statement a about you agree or disagree with this statement? give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1、i full agree with the argument that(1)支持观点 one thing(2)支持观点 a 的原因之一。for another,(3)支持观点 a 的原因之二。history has told us that(4)历史证明 a 的正确性。for example,(5)举例证明。furthermore,(6)进一步阐述 a 的正确性。but some people stubbornly cling to(7)人们反对观点 we listen to these people we will(8)听从那些

2、according to the opinion of some people , there are quite different attitudes towards claim that(1)人们的观点 r, i cannot agree(2)我反对观点 ,(3)我反对 aaa 的第一个理由。that is to say(4)进一步阐述。second,(5)我反对 aaa 的第二个理由。in fact,(6)举例说明。finally,(7)我反对 aaa 的第三个理由。to sum up,(8)总结我的观点。but it is also necessary to stress that(9)退一步总结。

3、it is often said that(1)题目所给的观点。those who hold this view say that(2)进一步阐述该观点。i disagree with this point of view for the following first and foremost one is(3)我反对的理由之一。history presented many examples(4)举例说明。my second reason is(5)我反对的理由之二。we can learn this from the saying “(6)用一句谚语说明 ”.finally, it seems4、the problem is a much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily may prefer one to another, although some have no opinion about if i am concerned, i find it hard to agree with of all,(1)我反对 aaa 的第一个理由。it is common in daily life that(2)举例说明。another thing i should point out is that(3)我反对 aaa 的第二个理由。moreover,(4)我反对 aaa 的第三个理由。in general, aaa may have something right in special it is necessarily a bad thing to(5)aaa 的缺陷。to my mind,(6)总结我的观点。

5、there is a growing tendency these days for people to do people criticize this because they think(1)人们观点 also say that(2)进一步阐述观点 it seems to me that aaa is useful to(3)aaa 的好处之一。i firmly bbb fits me in two ways: first,(7)我支持 bbb 的原因之一。second,(8)我支持 bbb 的原因之二。人会产生的后果。in conclusion, i think we should not(9)我们不应该怎麽做。on the contrary, we should(10)我们应该怎麽做。to be true that(7)此处填入该观点的可取之处。but(8)我反对的理由之三。all in all, i firmly believe that(9)总结我的观点。

believe that it is not only useful but also necessary to(4)aaa 的好处之二。examples can be easily found(5)举例说明。as a result,(6)进一步说明 aaa 的好处。so, based on the above discussion, i argue that(7)总结我的观点。

（二）给一个论点，主要是对两个事务进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。具体表现如下： a is superior to b in doing

you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer.1、something we all cannot neglect as we get older is to accept the opinions of the question whether it is better to choose a or choose b, i have long admitted that a has a strong ely ,however,(1)提出自己的观点支持 b.i disagree with the above statement and support the superiority of gh(2)a 具备的优势。there is no evidence to suggest that(3)a 胜于 ’s more,(4)a 的一个缺点。it also has been said that(5)a 的第二个缺点。to be sure,(6)支持 b 的一个理由。another thing why i dispute the statement above is that i am very sure that(7)支持 b 的另一个理由。for example,(8)举例说明。in conclusion, a could never equal b(9)a 和 b 的比较，总结观点。

2、this controversy describes the dilemma faced by many for me, i agree with the above statement that a is superior to b in doing is an obvious fact that(1)赞同 a 比 b 好的第一个原因。for instance,(2)举例说明。another reason i should point out lies in the fact that(3)赞同 a 比 b 好的第二个原因。in today’s world,(4)举例说明。this may explain why a is better than the other hand , a common sense goes that(5)b 的劣势之一。moreover,(6)b 的劣势之二。to conclude,(7)总结我的观点。

命题形式三：开放观点式

argument a(and b)about doing ’s your opinion about it ?

1、an important question facing us today is(1)提出问题。some argue that(2)观点 example,(3)举例说明观点 ,(4)进一步阐述观点 nts of this view say that(5)观点 claim that(6)全面阐述 my part, there are merits to both of these should(7)我们应该赞同 a。at the same time,(8)同时也不能忽视 b.2、nowadays almost everyone discusses about whether aaa is ’s views on it are people believe

argue that(1)阐述观点 who believe b, on the other hand ,argue that(2)阐述观点 maintain that

(3)进一步阐述观点 is certain some truth on both sides, yet neither provides a satisfactory my view,(4)我的观点。we should(5)进一步阐述我的观点。as such,(6)这样做能带来的好处。

3、aaa is a question of have different notions about the matter: some hold that(1)观点 think

(2)观点 fore, i would like to have a look at the question in this of the strong points is that(3)aaa 的优势之一。moreover,(4)aaa 的优势之二。in fact,(5)举例说明。on the other hand,(6)aaa 的劣势之一。in addition,(7)aaa 的劣势之二。for example,(8)举例说明。as shown above, i would like to say that(9)总结我的观点。so, each case should be reviewed and concluded on the basis of facts.4、people who support aaa hold that(1)观点 s this is true, but it can not be denied that(2)我提出反对意见。i think it is important to take a glance at the argument on both one side ,people may have reasons to believe most important reason is(3)人们支持 aaa 的理由之一。in addition,(4)人们支持 aaa 的理由之二。for instance,(5)举例说明。moreover,(6)人们支持 aaa 的理由之三。on the other hand, people who attack aaa claim that(7)观点 also say that there will be problems of(8)aaa 带来的问题。as far as i am concerned, i come to the notion that everything in the world has its own two lly, aaa is acceptable in some r, problems do should take more efficient measures to avoid and minimize ys,(1)题目中问题。however, this situation has raised people say that(2)观点 point out that(3)进一步阐述观点 example,(4)举例说明。on the other hand, others say that(5)观点 my opinion, neither side is completely is true that(6)我的观点。for instance,(7)举例说明。however,(8)从反面来平衡我的观点 命题形式四：报告文

a specific problem aaa, suggest possible solutions(a,b,……)or recommendations(a,b,……).give reasons for your answer.1、nowadays aaa has become a serious problem in many reasons for this behavior are not clear , but some sociologists claim that(1)社会学家认为导致问题的原因。as a matter of fact,(2)进一步阐述此问题的原因。consequently,(3)该原因产生的结果。in my point of view, a possible cause of the problem is that(4)我认为导致问题的原因之一。also,(5)我人们导致问题的原因之二。the effects of this are well known,(6)aaa 造成的影响之一。furthermore,(7)aaa 造成的影响结果之二。the cost to society is great.(8)社会上付出的代价。to conclude, i recommend that the only sensible way to solve this problem is(9)总结并提出建议。

2、people how are well aware of the problems aaa creates:(1)aaa 带来的问题。the solution, i think, is for government to(2)政府所要解决的问题。one way is that(3)措施之一。there is also another way(4)措施之二。moreover,(5)措施之

三。indeed, we should make great efforts to solve this problem(6)总结自己的观点。

3、in most countries aaa is causing a considerable number of some countries it is difficult to(1)阐述 aaa 带来的第一个问题。in addition,(2)aaa 带来的第二个问题。also,(3)aaa 带来的第三个问题。in my opinion, there are two main solutions to the discussed y,(4)第一个解决方案。secondly,(5)第二个解决方案。this is beginning to have an effect in some countries.i believe that other countries will also take this way to solve the problem in the near sum up, if the problem continues, the effects will be we should(6)总结观点。

4、it is very difficult to(1)提出问题。there have been several attempts, but they have had generally little or no methods are usually ineffective for many ,(2)这些方法不奏效的原因之一。second,(3)这些方法不奏效的原因之二。in addition,(4)这些方法不奏效的原因之三。another attempt is(5)提出另一种尝试。in my opinion, this is a waste of money and labor,(6)我认为这种尝试不奏效的原因之一。also,(7)我人们这种尝试不奏效的原因之二。to conclude, no current methods as mentioned above are effective.i think governments as well as individuals need to work harder to find a realistic solution.5、one of the most challenging problems of today’s world is that(1)提出问题。it’s not only a question of the government but also a question of the individuals.i would like to discuss the possible ,(2)第一个解决方案。the advantage of this solution is that(3)第一个解决方案的优点点。the second one is(4)第二个解决方案。by this method,(5)第二个解决方案的优点。unfortunately, this is not a truly available solution as the reality in our country r way of solving the problem is to(6)第三个解决方案。this does not seem a very fair one because(7)第三个解决方案不好的原因。one further solution here i can find is(8)第四个解决方案。however,(9)第四个解决方案的不足之处。in sum, it’s true that we can not find a definite solution for this of the solution i presented has both advantages and i believe it can be only a matter of time in the 1

(一)信息描述或数据比较

1、the graph illustrates(1)总体介绍图表情况。according to the graph, in year1,(2)year1 年的信息描述。for example,(3)举例说明。however by year2,(4)year2 的信息描述。during the same period, there was a large increase in(5)描述数据转变。in year1,(6)提供 year1 的数据。in contrast, by year2,（7）提供 year2 的数据。we can conclude from this that(8)总结图表最突出的特点。

2、the two pie charts describe(1)总体介绍图表情况。this first point to note is(2)图表提供的第一条信息。comparing the graphs,(3)两幅表比较。the graph also suggest that(4)图表说明的问题。in conclusion, it can be seen from the data that(5)总结图表数据所证明的内容。the most noticeable thing is(6)总结图表最突出的特点。

3、the first graph illustrates(1)总体介绍图表情况。the second graph shows(2)图表提供的第一条信息。the first graph reveals that(3)描述图表说明的问题。the second graph tells us that(4)图表说明的问题。as can be seen from the two graphs that

(5)总结图表最突出的特点。

4、the two pie charts show(1)总体介绍图表情况。and the column chart gives l,(2)三幅图整体上所提供的信息。the pie charts shows that(3)图表提供的第一条信息。the highest percentage of(4)图表说明的问题 is(5)%.however, this is less than the percentage of(6)图表说明的问题 for some reasons, which is approximately(7)%.the common reasons of

(8)are（9）原因。it is apparent that(10)描述数据所表明的内容。

5、the indicators used in the table reflect that(1)总体介绍图表情况。the data concerning(2)填入指数 1 indicators shows that(3)指数反映的情况。there figures are overwhelmingly greater than the corresponding figures of(4)填入 1 个信息主体。（5）填入指数 2 reflect(6)指数反映的情况。as for(7)指数 3 indicators, it roughly follows the same ranking.(8)指数 3 反映的情况。according to(9)指数 4 it can be seen that(10)指数反映的情况。the data appears to confirm that(11)描述数据所表明的内容。

(二)描述事件的具体步骤或过程

the chart shows that there are four stages to complete(1)此处填入一件具体的事情。the first stage is(2)the second stage involves(3),(4)is the third of all,(5)完成步骤三的第一步then(6)完成步骤三的第二步。the last stage consists of(7).(三)描述一事物说明她的工作程序

aaa is(1)the diagram shows it’s construction and how it mainly consists of(2)aaa 的组成部分。aaa works as follows: first(3)then(4)afterwards,(5).at last,(6).常见同义词归纳

解决: solve, deal with, cope with, handle, resolve, address, tackle

损害：damage, hurt, injure, harm, impair, undermine, jeopardize

给与：give, offer, render, impart, provide, supply, afford

培养：：develop, cultivate, foster

优势：advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength

缺陷：disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness

使迷惑：puzzle, bewilder, perplex, baffle

重要的：key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative

认为：think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convinced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced

保护：protect, conserve, preserve

确保：assure, ensure, guarantee, pledge

有害的：bad, baneful evil, harmful, detrimental

要求 ：request, demand, needs, requisition

消除 ：eliminate, clear, remove, clear up, take away, smooth away

导致：lead to, bring about, result in, cause, spark off, conduce to, procure, induce, generate

因此：so, therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a consequence, accordingly, as a result, because of this, as a result of this

增长至：grow to，rise to，increase to，go up to，climb to，ascend to，jump to，shoot to

降低至：dip to，fall to，decline to，decrease to，drop to，go down to，reduce to，slump to，descend to，sink to，slide to 保持稳定：level out，do not change，remain stable，remain still，remain steady，be stable，maintain the same level，remain unchanged，be still，remain the same level，stay constant，keep at the same level，level off，stabilize，keep its stability，even out

急剧地：dramatically，drastically，sharply，hugely，enormously，steeply，substantially，considerably，significantly，markedly，surprisingly，strikingly，radically，remarkably，vastly，noticeably

平稳地：steadily，smoothly，slightly，slowly，marginally，gradually，moderately，mildly宣称：allege, assert, declare, claim 发生：happen, occur, take place

原因：reason, factor, cause

发展：development, advance, progress

有益的：useful, helpful, beneficial, profitable, rewarding，advantageous

影响：influence, impact, effect

明显的：clear, obvious, evident, self-evident, manifest, apparent, crystal-clear

占：comprise, take up, account for, constitute, consist of, make up, occupy, hold, compose

与…相比：compared with，compared to，in comparison with，in comparison to，by comparison with，by comparison to 对比而言：by contrast，in contrast，on the other hand，on the contrary=，conversely

展示：show, reveal, illustrate, demonstrate, depict, present, represent, describe

大约：approximately，almost，about，around，nearly，roughly

波动：fluctuate，go ups and downs，display a fluctuation，demonstrate a fluctuation

事实上：practically，in practice，essentially，in essence，in reality，in effect，in fact，as a matter of fact，it is a fact that 换言之：namely，that is to say，in other words，to put it like this，to put it differently，to put it from another way，to put it from another angle

雅思写作真题 雅思写作评分标准细则篇三

school teachers used to be the source of r，some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because there is an increasing variety of information is your opinion?(08年4月24日考题)要对上面的句子进行重新描述，最简单的就是用同义词替换，请看下表：

know: recognize

comprehend

grasp

understand

realize 3.使用短语进行替换

some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big s the advantages and disadvantages of you support or oppose this statement? 在这一段话里，可以替换的短语如下所示:

英特网对我们的日常生活带来很大的影响。这句话我们可以写出不同的搭配。比如:

一、并列结构的使用

通过对官方范文的研究发现，考生在用并列结构提高句型档次的时候可以从以下几个层面入手：

1.名词并列: n1，n2，n3，…

这种并列又可以具体通过以下2种结构实现： a).a，b，c，… and other xs b).x，such y as a，b，c，…

g，writing，listening and other academic subjects could be learned from books，or primarily from knowledge，such academic subjects as reading，writing，listening，could be learned from books，or primarily from is of great importance for people to read imaginative literature，such as poetry，novels or is of great importance for people to read novels and other types of imaginative literature such as poetry and mythology.2.名词性成分并列: n.+ what/how/whether/if… 这种并列又可以具体通过以下2种结构实现： a).what=something that b).how=the way/manner in which parents educate their children merely by instinct rather than proper pedagogy，and usually do not care about their relationship with children and how much neglect influences the future development of their children.i students are eager to obtain knowledge，but they lack the sense of what is good，or what is necessary and how much a deficiency in the concept of viewing the situation as a whole would mislead fellow americans，ask not what your country can do for you，ask what you can do for your fellow citizen of the world，ask not what american will do for you，but what together we can do for the freedom of man.(john kennedy)3.形容词成分并列: a).a1 and a2+n b).a1+yet/but+a2+n c).a1，a2+n+that…

d).a1，a2，so a3 that/as to…

i.a small town à a small and peaceful town a good teacher à a good and very impressive teacher a stupid decision à a stupid and incorrigible decision ii.a simple yet effective method a direct and simple yet magically effective method an irrational yet understandable decision a fair and balance，yet undesirable decision an obvious yet not the most significant reason students can hardly stand for his typically dry and dull lectures that would normally continue at least several quarters without giving any essential impact that technology has had on our daily life and society in general，is will become even greater as computers get faster，smaller，smarter，and so inexpensive that virtually everyone will be able to own one.v.a class led by a lethargic teacher could be extremely dull，and so boring that drives everybody in the class into ng in essence is a process that is time-consuming，painstaking，and so hard that virtually only persistent few can finally have a sense of real achievement.4.副词成分并列: a).ad1 and ad2+n b).ad1+yet/but+ad2+n c).ad1，ad2+prep…

d).ad1，ad2，so ad3 that/as to…

i.a conscientious teacher always prepares his lecture carefully，intelligently，and with the full consideration of all possible aspects concerning the from energizing the athletes, physical strength helps them plough into the games enthusiastically and with confidence and even act as a deterrent force to their rivals to some extent.5.动词并列: a).…v1，v2+ing，v3+ing… b).s1+v1+ing，s2+v2…

absent-minded teacher lacks drive to make class intensely focused，often preparing nothing in advance，wandering among random topics，thus wasting and killing times of industrial a result of this, food dealers have made huge profit from it, thereby promoting the sector as well as creating more jobs.6.句子并列: a).…, and therefore/thus/consequently b).not only/simply/merely…but also/…as well/even… c).neither…nor d).not that…but that… e).that引导的宾语从句 f).that引导的定语从句 g).that引导的主语从句

keep records of thoughts and ideas, and are therefore the major source from which people obtain e children unfortunately have few rights to make their own decisions, and consequently often have to do things that they do not enjoy doing at vehicles have extended the range of people’s activity, and thus made much more goods available to local ers have not only brought convenience, but they have also made people learn that emails or telephones have made people less personal, but that people themselves have become less of several possible reasons is that people usually lack of adequate communicating r, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.二、从句的使用

从句的使用是提高写作得分最有效的一种手段，雅思写作中主要涉及的从句主要是名词性从句，状语从句和定语从句，朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生既可以单独使用这些从句来组织句子，还可以采用从句套从句的方式来提高句型的复杂度。7.从句套从句: who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent is very few, and the money is the recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.宾语从句+定语从句+表语从句

has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.定语从句+状语从句

reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.宾语从句+定语从句

overall, i think that this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.宾语从句+非限制性定语从句 unately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people.名词性从句+状语从句

三、倒装句的使用

倒装句的使用主要包括否定词位于句首时的倒装，比较句中第2个句子的倒装和虚拟语气条件句中的倒装。

only should the parent spent more time with their children, they should also try to communicate with their children more in this way can this issue be effectively a bad environment will make people in very few regions do the residents have enough water for their daily needs.第一，定语从句。

这应该算是写作中最常用的一种句型之一。适当地运用定语从句可以给你的文章增色不少。例如，下面的这两个句子用上定语从句马上就变成了一个漂亮的复杂句。bad books contain evil much description

them, there might be , and violence, superstition

→ bad books, in which there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex, contain evil thoughts.第二，状语从句。

在写作当中运用的最多的是以下五种状语从句，即原因状语从句，让步状语从句，条件状语从句，时间状语从句和目的状语从句。

1.原因状语从句：常由because, as, since和for引导 eg: nonetheless demerits.尽管如此，我还是赞成太空探险，因为它的好处远远大于坏处。

2.让步状语从句：常由although, though, even though/ if, as long as和notwithstanding引导

eg: although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence be obtained at any age and at any place.尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。3.条件状语从句：常由if, on the condition that和providing that引导 eg: if you want to achieve

something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.假如你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志，你必须努力工作、艰苦奋斗、准备好条件。4.时间状语从句：常由when和while引导

eg: when it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。5.目的状语从句: 常由so that和in order that引导

eg: millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills andtechnology 保持优势。

so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识，使得他们在就业市场能

that education can , i am still in favor of space travel, for its merits far outweigh 第三，宾语从句。eg: some people claim

that government should be mainly responsible for the environmental pollution.一些人认为政府应对环境污染负主要责任。

eg: many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is aninevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果，无法避免。第四，同位语从句。eg: it is an undeniable increasingly serious.环境污染变得越来越严重是不可否认的事实。

eg: no one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.没有人能否认这一基本事实：对于一般工人来讲，轻松掌握这些技术是不可能的。第五，主语从句。

eg: what has caught our attention

is /it is noticeable that the environment in

.fact that environmental pollution becomes both the rural and urban areas is deteriorating 值得注意的是农村和城市的生态环境都在不断恶化。

eg: it is universally acknowledged that environmental pollution becomes one of the most serious problems in china or even the world as a whole.众所周知，环境污染问题是中国乃至世界面临的最为严重的问题之一。第六，强调句: it is ＋ 被强调的内容 ＋ that eg: it is cars and factories that release environment.汽车和工厂排放大量的废气，使得环境被污染。第七，倒装句。

eg: only if the government will take some appropriate this intractable problem be tackled.只有政府采取适当的措施，这个棘手的问题才能被解决。第八，被动语态。

eg: every means should be tried to protect the environment on which people live.人们应竭尽全力来保护我们赖以生存的环境。

measures, will

a great deal of gases, polluting the 第九，分词结构：包括现在分词和过去分词。

eg: tourism, which is a rising industry, has become the major source of economy, playing crucial role in many asian countries.旅游业是一个新兴的行业，它成为经济的主要来源, 在很多东南亚国家起着尤为重要的作用。

eg: to be more specific , government should stage some relevant

.laws or regulations to severely punish the factory producing a great number of pollutants and the people littering or spitting deliberately 人进行严惩。第十，插入语。

一种独立成分,与句子的其它成分一般没有语法上的关系,大都是对一句话作一些附加说明或解释。它通常由一个词、一个短语或一个句子构成,位置较为灵活,可置于句首、句中或句末,一般用逗号或破折号与句子隔开。eg: computer, an indispensable conveniences.电脑，我们生活中必不可少的一部分，给我们带来了极大的方便。

eg: college students, lacking social experience, are easily cheated.大学生，没有社会经验，容易上当受骗。

part in our life, has brought us great 具体来说，政府应该出台相关法律法规对制造大量污染物的工厂及故意乱扔垃圾随地吐痰的

雅思写作真题 雅思写作评分标准细则篇四

翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同时，据笔者的长期观察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”下面，笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。

一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说

盲点1：无话可说

这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故，日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题，更不用说对它有什么想法了。

盲点1击破：四多原则

多看范文；多关注时事，观察生活；多与人交流；多记录自己的想法。比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文书当中，分领域熟悉雅思考题及其观点。当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出无数ideas时，关上书，写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点，如果某个领 域发生短路，翻开书重新阅读，直至能够写出来为止。

盲点2：千言万语

这类考生往往见多识广，看到话题时感到倚马千言。可是由于词汇量和逻辑方面有所欠缺。往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说”的尴尬。

盲点2击破：词以类记原则

此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇，如在写肥胖问题时，考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲点3：标新立异

这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好，力求与众不同。

盲点3击破：自圆其说原则

雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试，词汇、语法和句式才是测试重点。况且，考官阅卷数载，见多识广，你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点，所以我们讲究论点论据

言之有理，能够自圆其说即可。

盲点4：真情流露

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻，写作时有“黄河之水，延绵不绝”之势。但兴奋之时，有些忘乎所以，与主题渐行渐远。

盲点4击破：切中主题原则

这类考生必须建立自己的一套逻辑框架，并严格执行。如在写argumentation类题型时，全文四段：“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段为己方观点论证段；第三段为让步段；第四段总结段。切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。

二、组织结构(organization)：起承转合，行云流水

盲点1：天马行空

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。有时，尽管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在逻辑上的重复或冲突。

盲点1击破：起承转合原则

除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段(承)为己方观点论证段；第三段(转)为让步段；第四段(合)总结段。”的逻辑框架之外，段落内部每一句也需要有这样的逻辑框架来约束，如让步段中：“some people may argue that „(起);because they maintain that „。(承);however ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact „.。(转);therefore , i believe „。(合)

盲点2：单句游离

这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词，有时就算有，逻辑连词也使用错误。或者是标点不注意。最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand。它连接的是转折，却无数次被误解成递进。

盲点2击破：行云流水原则

考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词，力求做到行云流水，常见的逻辑连词有：

因果关系：

因：as since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

举例关系：take for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an apt illustration ,对比关系：while ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

让步关系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,provided that , if

三、词汇(vocabulary)：同义改写，百花齐放

盲点1 ： 遭遇生词

大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此，写作过程中无数次由于生词的关系而短路。

盲点1击破：同义改写原则

其实考生对不认识的词完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龙，望女成凤完全可以写成：all parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：对于各个领域内的专有名词我们鼓励大家履行词以类记原则，毕竟只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简单的词汇解释难词。如有同学在解释寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。

盲点2：同义重现

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet时，有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。这会让考官出现极严重的审美疲劳，分数自然不高。

盲点2击破： 百花齐放原则

其实考生在平时的习作中应注意近义词、反义词、衍生词的积累，并不断练习。如上面的advantages的同义词为benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲点3：大词连篇

很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多，得分就越高。

盲点3击破：整体协调原则

看到剑桥系列教材大家会发现，考官给出的范文大词生词寥寥可数，真正有说服力的是你用的词能够准确无误的表达你的思想。试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地使用各种生僻词汇来堆砌文章，这无疑给考官造成一种“暴发户”般的强烈视觉冲击，最后只能适得其反。所以，用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构整体协调的原则。

三、句式(sentence structure)：长短结合，错落有致

盲点1：长篇累牍

和用词上的大词连篇一样，部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。

盲点1击破：长短结合原则

事实上，如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话，会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的情况是长短句结合使用，而且论点通常用短句，而论据则长句居多。

盲点2：短小精悍

和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，为了保险起见，这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are的主系表和主谓宾句型。

盲点2击破：灵活多变原则

这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive一些，他们将是考场上最大的“黑马”。如以parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability这个简单句为例，通过强调句型的包装我们得到：

it is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到：

so important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通过插入语的包装我们可以得到：

scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到：

based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通过如此灵活的加工和包装，你会发现，简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人，这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。

总之，掌握了如上原则，再加上持之以恒的练习，考生一定能在task 2中获得自己满意的分数。（编